How does this patriotic quote I made sound?
America enemies make the same mistake time and time again, they think they see a cowardly nation they can easily defeat. When really it's a great nation filled with people just like me and you willing to stand shoulder to shoulder declaring in one voice If this is the end we will not go quietly into the night!
Update:I all ready know about the typos
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It's inspiring and true.
Grammar errors:
America's enemies (as the other person said)
When really, it's a... (comma after really)
...declaring in one voice "If this... into the night!" (add quotation marks)
Sorry, I'm OCD about grammar
It's inspiring but instead of saying " America enemies" you ought to say " America's enemies" other than that WOW