This is my homework for my English class about making a letter for my mother. But I'm not confident with my wordings and grammar. Can someone check this out for me? Fix some grammar mistakes and change some better wordings? I will give BA immediately.
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"Hi how are, I made this letter to thank you for all the sacrifice you have done for our family. We didn't even talk before you left us. I miss all your cooking's and your cranky attitude every time you got irritated by something. I am fairly independent now. And little by little, I also do and help dad with all the housework.
I came back to school last June, as I mentioned in our last conversation. And this time I will not disappoint your expectations from me. For now, somehow I am working hard with my school work. I am still trying to adopt the new surroundings in Arrelano University. Even though there are many school activities, I still manage to do it. Just try to believe me this time. "
Update:Oops I forgot to add "you" in the first sentence of the first paragraph..
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"Hi how are you? I made this letter to thank you for all of the sacrifices you've made for our family. We didn't even talk before you left us. I miss your cooking and that cranky attitude that you used to get whenever something irritated you. I am fairly independent now, and I also help out dad with chores that needs to be done around the house.
I came back to school last June, as I mentioned in our last conversation. This time I will not disappoint you. For now I am working hard with my school work, but I am still trying to adapt to the new surroundings in Arrelano University. Even though there are many school activities, I still manage to make it through. Please try to believe me this time."
I wasn't sure about the last part, did you mean "Please try to believe IN me" or what I said? If you meant this instead, just replace it with what I originally wrote.
"Hi, how are you? I am writing this letter to thank you for all the sacrifices you have made for our family. We didn't even get a chance to talk before you left us. I miss all your cooking and your cranky attitude every time you got irritated by something! I am fairly independent now and little by little, I am also helping Dad with all the housework.
I returned to school last June, as I mentioned during our last conversation. And this time, I will not disappoint you in your expectations of me. For now, I am somehow managing to work hard with my school work. I am still trying to adapt to the new surroundings in Arrelano University. Even though there are many school activities, I still manage to do the work. Just try to believe in me this time. "
"Hi, how are you? I made this letter to thank you for all the sacrifices you have made for our family. We never even talked before you left us. I miss all of your cooking and your cranky attitude every time you got something irritates you. I am fairly independent now. And little by little, I make do and try to help dad with all the housework.
I came back to school last June, as I mentioned in our last conversation. And this time I will not disappoint your expectations of me. Now, I am somehow working hard on my school work. I am still trying to adapt to the new surroundings in Arrelano University. Even though there are many school activities tempting me, I still manage to stay on track. Just try to believe me this time."
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I made some minor changes. There were some sentences that I could not comprehend what you were trying to say, so I did my best and reworded it however. Change it as you see fit.
Hope this helped.