Like the punctuation and stuff.
If there's anything I need to fix, please let me know.
"People need a sense of security. No matter what it is: socially, emotionally, physically, etc. God made us that way; He made us to need a sense of security. In everything, He makes us feel secure, safe, protected, comforted. He made us to have the urge to seek that, through whatever it may be. What we should be seeking after over everything, though, is God. He should be our everything. When we fully seek after Him and all that He is, we find all that a person really ever needs, one of which being security."
And please no hate on the topic I chose, I just need it to be checked for grammar.
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"People need a sense of security, no matter what it is. Socially, emotionally, and physically. God made us that way. He made us to want a sense of security in everything. He made us feel secure, safe, protected, and comforted. He made us have the urge to seek whatever it may be, we are seeking. What we should be seeking after all of this, is God! He should be our everything! When we fully seek after him, and see all that he is, we will find what a person only needed was security!”