Is my grammar correct?

Like the punctuation and stuff.

If there's anything I need to fix, please let me know.

"People need a sense of security. No matter what it is: socially, emotionally, physically, etc. God made us that way; He made us to need a sense of security. In everything, He makes us feel secure, safe, protected, comforted. He made us to have the urge to seek that, through whatever it may be. What we should be seeking after over everything, though, is God. He should be our everything. When we fully seek after Him and all that He is, we find all that a person really ever needs, one of which being security."

And please no hate on the topic I chose, I just need it to be checked for grammar.

Thanks!~

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