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well first correct ur sentence " lots of healthy food would your body maintain properly."

secondly, u kinda use the words "these days" alot, and this really didnt persuade me that much, try to make ur introuction moree excitingg , cause ur first sentence didnt really wow me that much. the first couple of sentences are always the most important because thats the first thing everyone reads, so u want to make it as intresiing as possible so they can get more into the story.

OK, first the proofread. Paragraphs really should have three sentences, but if your teacher didn't specify that, you may be all right.

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Everyone should stay healthy. Eating lots of healthy food helps your body function properly. There are several reasons why I should plan the school’s lunch menu.

First, eating right is a very important part of your life. It helps you stay strong. [this is an incomplete sentence as is, try something like:] Eating a good balance of vitamins and nutrients helps students pay more attention in class. People these days tend to eat fewer healthy foods than they are supposed to. As a result, the body doesn’t have enough fiber and proper nutrition. [I changed that one because you use "healthy food" twice here, which is redundant...when you catch that, try using something similar instead of exactly the same words, so you're not making the same point twice] Second, eating lots of fruits would also help. Instead of serving pizza for lunch, a fruit cup and a peanut butter and jelly sandwich would be a lot healthier. Finally, lowering calories is the most important factor in a healthy diet. It can affect the rest of your life. In this world, portion sizes and calories are increasing [what's bad about that? make sure you finish your point, don't assume your reader knows. Something like "beyond what's healthy" or "so many people get an entire day's fat and calories in each meal" would be good.] The main thing is to watch what you’re eating before it goes in your stomach.

There are so many reasons why I should plan the school’s lunch menu. Eating healthy is the best thing you can do for your body.

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This is almost more of an informative essay than a persuasive one. You're telling me why it would be good to eat healthier, but not convincing me YOU should be the one to change it.How about using that last paragraph to tell me why you're the best one for the job? Don't forget to sum everything up, though!

reliable however the human reflexes project could be on no longer oh i dont think of that in case you kill somebody you may visit penal complex for 10 years yet while this is your opinion, thats ok yet different than that, especially reliable