This is my homework for my English class about making a letter for my mother. But I'm not confident with my wordings and grammar. Can someone check this out for me? Fix some grammar mistakes and change some better wordings? I will give BA immediately.
Ok here:
"Hi how are, I made this letter to thank you for all the sacrifice you have done for our family. We didn't even talk before you left us. I miss all your cooking's and your cranky attitude every time you got irritated by something. I am fairly independent now. And little by little, I also do and help dad with all the housework.
I came back to school last June, as I mentioned in our last conversation. And this time I will not disappoint your expectations from me. For now, somehow I am working hard with my school work. I am still trying to adopt the new surroundings in Arrelano University. Even though there are many school activities, I still manage to do it. Just try to believe me this time. "
Update:Oops sorry I forgot to add "you" in the first sentence of the first paragraph.
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"Hi how are" -
I'm guessing this is supposed to be a question? So this should be "Hi, how are you?"
"I miss all your cooking's" -
This should not have an apostrophe and an "s" on the end. So it should just be "cooking".
"I came back to school last June" -
This should say "went" not "came".
Also I'm not sure that your sentence "For now, somehow I am working hard with my school work" is correct. I'm not entirely sure on what you meant by this sentence, so just check it again.
"Hi how are you?I made this letter to thank you for all the sacrifice you have done for our family. We didn't even talk before you left us. I miss all your cooking and your cranky attitude every time you got irritated by something. I am fairly independent now. And little by little, I also do and help dad with all the housework.
I came back to school last June, as I mentioned in our last conversation. And this time I will not disappoint your expectations from me. For now, somehow I am working hard with my school work. I am still trying to adopt the new surroundings in Arrelano University. Even though there are many school activities, I still manage to do it. Just try to believe me this time. "
Now this letter is correct.
"Hi Dear Mom, how are you, I made this letter to thank you for all the sacrifice you have done for our family. We didn't even talk before you left us. I miss all your cooking's and your cranky attitude every time you got irritated by something. I am fairly independent now. And little by little, I also do and help dad with all the housework.
I came back to school last June, as I mentioned in our last conversation. And this time I will not disappoint your expectations from me. For now, somehow I am working hard with my school work. I am still trying to adopt the new surroundings in Arrelano University. Even though there are many school activities, I still manage to do it. Just try to believe me this time. "