One could drive themselves insane,
Dwelling on the unfulfilled.
They could grieve for dead remains
Of the dreams they never lived.
Chance awaited those who came,
But no journey was involved.
Wisdom whispered to remain
Where their present lives evolved.
As time passes, time will wait
For the life fate has allowed.
Paths we follow must dictate
The events we are endowed.
Feel a person pass you by.
Know desire, in dizzy sway,
Turn and give a mournful sigh,
As they vanish, gone away.
We're empowered certain space.
Only drifting dreams intrude.
We can't alter or erase,
Only trace, brief interludes
Update:Edit...failed to insert the revised stanza 3 from worksheet.
Time will pass and as we wait,
Future knowledge disallowed.
Paths, once chosen, indicate
These events we are endowed.
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Like far-off forlorn coyote's cry,
or black cat crossing midnight meander,
moments in time's passing by
leave me to spurt words in candor;
yet my heart often plays the fool
dancing alongside kings and queens
who tend to break or bend the rules,
assuring end justifies means.
I stumble along the path of lies-
I hear the coyote, meet the cat;
the fool is transformed, I am wise.
Queens and kings could not do that.
This interlude has made me smile.
You touched my heat with true Bourne style.
I know living in reality for some hurts.
Today I'm neutral,thanks to your poem.
bye...
Time is a stealty creature, often hurtful, rarely standing still. Your poem flows like the River of Time.
Very relevant for me in my current state of mind.
Much enjoyed.
Hi Gene, I will say I enjoyed this in a most relative way, though it pained me as well as brought encouragement.
Last stanza a gripping sense, all the rest as much, but that put it in my face, again, as often it does, that we never truly know our shelf life, our end time, thouh some of us can more acutely suspect it.
Every moment lived, another lifetime.
"I feel, like you are with me dancing -
a glimpse of what-may-have-been entrancing an instant to stretch,
then mind returns, the current sights intrude, fetching with them the too-familiar -
My fantastic faded desire for a - Yes - some highly - expensive - moment - expanded
Higher Reality eludes my tired brain - I`m stranded -
Again."