My friend is taking a poetry writing class and she was assigned to write a poem about pain: can you critique it and tell her what is good and bad about it.
Thanks soo much!!
Her eyes tell her life story
The words don't leave her soul
She replays the images in her mind until she despises her reflection
she watches her devil escape her thoughts
he rips out her soul allowing her to fell nothing but the sound of metal scraping on her bare cold skin
she digs deeper
She begins to feel the unexplainable relief that one small object that keeps her living
the devil crawls back inside to her imagination leaving the rest of the world only to see the smile on her face that never lived.
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wow. that is amazing! I have written plenty of poems based on pain and sorrow and this is amazing!!