I made a poem, what do you think?
I just made a poem about my past two years. I'm 14 years old. Tell me what you think.
Take a trip down memory lane.
A contest to see who had the more pain.
I am the winner, two years in a row.
I was down to the ground, lower than low.
Parents saw nothing but a gleeful face.
Behind my sly smile was a hidden disgrace.
I’d hated myself with everything I had.
You would not have known it had been that bad.
He was a curse, he would haunt me forever,
Till I saw the light then it became much better.
The curse is like a virus that stays dormant.
Now and then he brings back his enjoyment.
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Terrific
*Starts clapping and cheering*
I'd say that poem talks about some really bad obstacle that you had to go through, and that you kept it completely to yourself. So because you did, it was slowly burning through your soul during those 2 years.
But it was beautiful.
Well done. It reads nicely and it makes me want to read more. Keep up the good work!
I enjoyed it ! the rhymes felt a little forced and kinda used up but other than that
it was good !
i read it in my head and now i can't forget it i loved ur poem and u get the credit