My new poem , Care to comment?

so this is my new poem , its about some friends of mine ,it might sound mean in some way but i write what i feel , and that's how i feel anyways here it goes

I feel that you are talking behind me

When really you're just sitting beside me

And I feel like your acting

When you are really crying

And I feel like that nothing is true

Even though I have all the clues

I still doubt you

You talk behind your friends back

So how about me

Do you talk about me

Can it be

I won't be surprised

But i might realize

That everything is fake

Because I knew it was gonna happen someday

i knew it was all an act

and you did your part without lacking

and that was not a fact

but when you smile and laugh

you make you feel

that its all real

___________

that's it , i don't know how to write the ending part ,ill find a way

but for now please telll me what you think of it

and give me advice

thanks

Update:

@first answer

im sorry but i dont understand what you are trying to say

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