so this is my new poem , its about some friends of mine ,it might sound mean in some way but i write what i feel , and that's how i feel anyways here it goes
I feel that you are talking behind me
When really you're just sitting beside me
And I feel like your acting
When you are really crying
And I feel like that nothing is true
Even though I have all the clues
I still doubt you
You talk behind your friends back
So how about me
Do you talk about me
Can it be
I won't be surprised
But i might realize
That everything is fake
Because I knew it was gonna happen someday
i knew it was all an act
and you did your part without lacking
and that was not a fact
but when you smile and laugh
you make you feel
that its all real
___________
that's it , i don't know how to write the ending part ,ill find a way
but for now please telll me what you think of it
and give me advice
thanks
Update:@first answer
im sorry but i dont understand what you are trying to say
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I think its really good!!!
You best ask yourself whether you actually have your self set on you feeling through anyways
Good.