rate this poem i made?

As i hold your hand...all my dreams unfold

as you let go,my dreams go untold

The meaning of my existence,is to keep you satisfied and proud

but some were in between,i, i let you down...

I appoglize for my wrongs,i can never have another first impression

but if i was given a second chance,it would be one you never would end up regretting

I was blind i couldnt see, i was struck with my own immaturity

the blames on me,but with every wrong comes purity

Forgive my negatives,and see my positive side

because for you i wear my heart on my sleeve,for you my emotions never hide

I made a mistake,a regret,and a lesson was learned

but within my heart i still have the sudden urge...

Its my regret..but your hard to forget

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