Vinyl hips
turntables scribbled ebony
rotating, nervously jiving
to this incredible funk,
multicultural cliques
of seasons form overhead,
summer weed -
holly's overbearing cousin
fireworking through the smog,
a remaining dozen
minute orbs -
like bopping fireflies
encircled glazed
tomato cheeks,
pulsating beacons
of blushes.
Update:You're absolutely right Gio, got a turntable!! :D
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So you bought your precious turntable and you enjoy it? Good! And you feel the music so much as to blush and re-blush over it like a beacon? Nice! I loved the last lines. You are unique! I love your style, it is so beautiful, someone has to know you, and then you start chirping to him, to all who understand. So you feel the things in such intensity. What are we going to do with you? Encourage you to become a writer, right? Hugs and bravo!
Dance to the music girl.Pump up the volume.
Only records I have are 45 rpm.Oldies.
Tomato cheeks? No idea..LOL
bye
Like a clusters of words not making any sense.
Sorry that was me taking less than 10 seconds reading it.
Beautiful feelings, behind the lines. I like your style and poem. Continue your good work!
Nice realistic poem!