Jupiter
I tried to get my telescope to focus
I watched the planet with my naked eye
I wandered through Aquarius
my humble eyes so curious,
so small among the great expanse of sky.
It burned like any other star
on any other night
a dragonfly inside a jar
a fading, distant light.
And I'm the only one who knows
that you burn just as bright.
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Beautiful, that's all i can say.
beautiful poem, with a wonderful story and meaningful message; the only comment i have is to stregthen the first line.. make it flowing and stand out like the rest of the poem
Whom ever represents Jupiter is a lucky person in that you see what you do in them.
sounds okay.
better than any of mine.
It's very nice. ^_^