Comments/Constructive Criticism: Jupiter, my new poem?

Jupiter

I tried to get my telescope to focus

I watched the planet with my naked eye

I wandered through Aquarius

my humble eyes so curious,

so small among the great expanse of sky.

It burned like any other star

on any other night

a dragonfly inside a jar

a fading, distant light.

And I'm the only one who knows

that you burn just as bright.

Thanks for all answers. Have a lovely day, and don't forget to make somebody smile. You never know how horribly their day is going! : )

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