Corpse poem - c/c please!?
Evicting spineless communities
off my burial best,
sly wiggler's squirming
touring my milky pressed gown,
their ringlet tails snagged
within guillotine lace loops,
in showers they're forced out
tumbling into death's
cool mattress,
where my body's still imprinted
dirt moulded to this ragged
frame of mine,
must 'ave slept
for at least forty years -
my poor vertebrae's all crooked!
was inspired by this song - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_OE3PDPlBY4
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Very serious poem. Strong too. The song (pardon me) sucks! Here some good songs, presents to you for being such a good friend!
Steppenwolf - Born To Be Wild
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7_81PchgI7A&feature...
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The Doors - Riders on the storm
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DKbPUzhWeeI&feature...
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The Doors - L.A. Woman
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=41ohFqkhASU&feature...
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The Doors - Alabama Song (Whisky Bar)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f5B28w51ygQ&feature...
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stand amid the roar
Of a surf-tormented cheese,
And I hold within my hand
Kittens
For the Steppenwolf - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dnhKPw2NXIw (monster mash)
Oh thank you for Corpse Bride, so much fun!