He looked up at her, with sad eyes

that told tales of promises and lies

life went back and life went forth

and the beauty of the beast was lost

She stared back at him, in a trance

but she had already had her chance

Yet she wept tears while he wept blood

and the pain of the beast was forgotten

There was dark, and there was light

there was love and there was fright

Nothing was ever in between

and the song of the beast went unheard

The rose petals fell away

and the beauty wept while the beast lay

forever at peace yet broken forever

and so the life of the beast was lost

I'm only 13 and would appreciate some input.