Docks poem - c/c please!?
Tightrope walkin'
barefoot by
those rusted ol' locks,
"Don't try an' be
heroic an' open 'em!"
Pa sternly warned
Childish giggles,
naivety in
the purest,
tickled greyin' skies -
"look! he's weepin' pa,
must 'ave laughed too much!"
humored tears
spattered across
a peachy youth'd
brow,
toothy smiles
all around!
crickets swayin'
on bandy legs
whistled in appreciation
of those
lighthearted days.
Update:I'm not thumbing anyone down - just so people know..
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I've been off Y!A too long :) This is what I miss.
Hi you, missed you and ya got a new face.
yer projections, yer suggestions and yer postins are always a good part of my days.
I mighta said chirped rather than whistled, but it's OK.
This poem is a nice way to end the week.
To make another person smile means it's great.
bandy legs,,ha,,ha,,ha,
Nice poem!
Good poem!
Have a sip o' the old Irish, mate! Has the smell o' the bog! A Jameson or two to you!
I love your post, it is so happy and cute! Thank you! From Athens me and the 12, salute you!
random much?