Feedback on my poem, Coral? : ]?

Theres a symphony of muted strings collecting in her soul, and

the sunset deep inside her is an influential glow.

A downtown ballerina with her unborn daughter's face who

lives life inside her boyfriend's arms cos thats her favorite place.

The creativity inside her stirs up all that's gone away, so

she aches for them to love her and it brings her down to pray.

One day she'll rise above the stars and let go all her pain.

Angels always show they're hurt by flooding us with rain.

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