i made up this poem just now right on the spot. it came out of nowhere. is it any good??
I AM HERE
YOU ARE THERE
THIS I CANNOT BEAR
I CUT MY WRISTS
I PULL MY HAIR
LIFE IS SO UNFAIR.
if you dont like it..its ok. i JUST NOW made it up cuz im bored. the words just popped into my head then i said them out loud and it sounded like a poem so i thought ill ask yall. THNX!
Update:im not emo im more a lil scene or punk but NOT EMO OR GOTH!!!!!
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This one made me chuckle. Going to have to show it to some friends. Now, time for me to blabber on and on because I'm evil like that:
It's not an "emo poem", it's a "whining poem". If it were lyrical, I guess you would be able to classify it as emo justly, seeing as emo is a type of music. But emo isn't being depressed, or cutting your wrists, or hating life. It's a music movement that came around the eighties and now has somehow morphed into a pair of jeans and a hair cut. That's like writing a poem about shopping and gossip and asking if people liked your "preppy poem". It's all a bunch of stereotypes that everyone would be better without.
...and seriously, what is the difference between being "emo", "scene", or "punk"? I've been called all three. And goth, but I know that goth is centered mainly around religion and I think sometimes the arts as well, so I know the difference there.
Thats a excellent poem
Very emo =]
umm... being emo isn't all about cutting your wrist you know. i personally don't like your poem (i'm sorry) i also despise people who make fun of people because of the way they act, look, or dress!
I like it. It's a good start. Keep it up.
tht's good, but more ppl respect the ones tht write from heart, not from thought,:]
i don't like it. im not a big fan of complaining. which is probably why i hate most new rock music.
i personally don't think it's great.
there are no discriptive words or anything at all ):
but keep writing!!!
definately!
my wrists are bloody just from reading it. well done
It's kinda' ...lame :/
&& I am an ex-emo.
I wish you hadn't bothered