The Dream Reader
Pages of the Ulysses begin to jerk
Between a vile jaundiced light and
The dawn of my murky sleep
In the ruins of my conscious mind, they lurk:
Archers, who shoot rippling arrows
Into the night, into the deep -
Into each word, though the already blurring
Martello closes its Arrow loops,
Drooping eyelids, tiresome
And the peculiar phrases rush, slurring
For cover, Joyce left unwounded,
As the speaker renders dumb,
Odysseus; peerless hero - how bizarre!
To have lurched on the edge of reason,
Fearlessly defeating every peril,
Whilst immersing yourself in sins - for you are
Only man, whilst you dream, whilst you wish.
Lusting, proud, feral!
When darkness pervades, and clarity prevails,
Once moral and modest armour cracks,
Stripped, stark, bare fragility
If Anubis could call and bring his scales
To weigh fantasy and thought
Against the foulness nobility,
Would we cower in shame? At the mistake
Of feeling passion and creativity
Weighed against a feather
(She would bitterly laugh if she were awake)
For she is sick to the point of sloth
Gluttonous from the
Guilt society feeds her
So she’d surrendered to fictional tales,
Relished the idiosyncrasies
Characters pertained, for their
Echoing voices seemed to fill her sails,
Insidious whispers of observers
Slowly made her aware:
Between shallow pretence and pathetic desire
To belong, sincerity lies and lies,
Desperately searching for a sense of purpose
Only to return senseless
Only to have discovered
My vices co-exist with my virtues
Update:2 form and express a sophisticated judgment of (a literary or artistic work) : a literary text may be criticized on two grounds: the semantic and the expressive.
This is what I meant by criticise, in case you are wondering, James.
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well emma, if you know... to form and express a sophisticated judgment of (a literary or artistic work) : a literary text may be criticized on two grounds: the semantic and the expressive.... why do you ask others opinions? for every one person that may offer something useful three will just tear you down. classic subject, maybe even the ORIGINAL classic subject. reads well out loud. many good lines, esp end line. co-existing vices and virtues are a favorite juxtaposition. glutinous from the guilt is nice too. i think this nicely done, but i don't know what good is, i only know like/ dislike. i will say i think you made it further into Ulysses than i was able before falling asleep, and had a better dream than it provided me.
That's very deep.
I was first going one way thinking how intellectual - knowledge of myth that I have only brushed passed.
Then it gets more shallow but darker and seemingly deliberately erotic, self critical of the character in the poem who possess both self loathing and wonder at 'her' own emotions which she appears both to relish at one level and be horrified at her lack of self control on another.
Very thought provoking - a bit scary but enticing - like a Siren.
Good job - way above my simplistic verse.
Thank you for answering my questions. I like what you did here my only problem is I don't like these poems that cause you to think about the deeper meaning behind the poem, but that has everything to do with me and nothing with your poem. Keep it up! :)
Please critiicise? Ok, it's sh*t.