i earlier posted a poem. i revised it. what do you think. gosh i'm probly getting annoying with these crappy poems ^.^

Why am I still like this? It’s been over a month, I should be over it by now

we were so happy, where did it go wrong?

He’s probably grateful to get rid of me, wishing I never come back

I look up only to see him with someone else

Involuntary tears fill my eyes, as I long for someone else to love

Somebody save me, from my world of darkness, that not I,

But he created.

after the "^.^" the poem starts