do you think this poem is good?
I've been abandoned sea of blood i scream for love but it echoes in silence i can't bare the pain in either way .
if i died would you care
would you notice
I've been abandoned in a sea of blood.
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u can add some more lines its great
Yikes, I heard thy scream O' Princess of the Sea.
Thou needest not die to get my attention, I care for thee.
I am sadden to find thee adrift in this sea of despair.
I shall call for a stout breeze to fill thy sails.
O' come thou mighty breeze, fill the sails of this fair maiden.
O' let her chase after thee to the islands of loving kindness,
Where she will never again be abandoned by love and happiness..
just some lines! you must have wrote it in many lines
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