Money is the anthem of success
But no one has ever been tickled with it
Those who have it are those who don't cherish it
Narcissistic
Life is the beautiful struggle
Everything depends on money that's the daily struggle
Living in this world creates a struggle within a struggle
Credit cards slide easy
Just trying getting out of debt
Try getting a stock instead
Senseless
There is a life that's foreign to us
There is a life to live
There is many things in life that don't require your economic situation to break in half
This life is what's foreign to us
The system needs to be rearranged
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I can see where you want to go with this,
but it needs to be made clearer.
Even as it is, your poem needs editing as
you are using far too many unnecessary
and 'small' words, which impedes the flow etc..
However, it's great that you are writing, so
please do not be disheartened :))
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Sorry Cathy - No, it does not make sense. I do think I know what you're trying to say and you might try it again with half as many lines.
BTW - "There is many things ... should be "There are many things"