Ok guys. I wrote a peon for my little brother because he got appendicitis. I want to make it into a lullaby but first I wanted to know if other people liked it. Thanks!

A small island

Poem

Deep in the ocean

On a small island

A palm tree

And a patch of grass

I pull my ship ashore

And lay down my head

You close your eyes

And when they open

The sun will rise

But when it falls

You'll know I'm back

The sun will always rise again

On our small island